Message-ID: <Pine.NEB.4.64.0706231045280.9851@panix3.panix.com>
From: Alan Sondheim <sondheim@panix.com>
To: Cyb <cybermind@listserv.aol.com>, Wryting-L <WRYTING-L@listserv.wvu.edu>
Subject: oadooad
Date: Sat, 23 Jun 2007 10:45:58 -0400 (EDT)
oadooad [2;1H [Ringing sondheim...] [Waiting for connection...] talk jeremy [24C############################### [31D# Rering jennifer # [31D############################### talk jeremy rewriting the analog/digital texts; they turn, churn, decay. world of cleansed, and on the other, with what might be considered intrusions, interventions, of dirt or debris, rewriting tends to assert both and neither, both helplessly intertwined, the need for rewriting, the hysteria of the symptom beyond or within that need, mulching content; this is only evident to me, it wouldn't be evident to anyone else, if I give you a work "parcel" and spell it "parcell" in the beginning, in the first write/rite, who knows what was intended?, something now invisible, there's no way to know, this isn't variorum. there's the mess, mish-mash, mash, mush, mosh, is just that, a mesh impossible to disentangle. rewriting's performative like this. rewriting's also inventive, assertive; what's rewritten is ontologically re/presented, the replete textual body. jeremy says to tell Jennifer that. jennifer asks why jeremy hasn't been around before. what? why? where? there're _blue lunar_ toys in the landscape, children of all lands lining up mouthing a dragon and a treasure chest. Jeremy runs ahead, Jennifer takes off her panties. Jeremy begins to dance, Jennifer recites Italian. Watch me do a BM says Jeremy and he does and she feels the letter's weight against hot skin. So watch me do a somersault, says Jeremy and he does. Jennifer climbs up the naked dragon, no, it's a witch catching on Jennifer's clothes. Jennifer is the hollow of Jeremy. Jeremy is the skull of Jennifer. "Oh what fun," a stony mess intrusion, one licks another from somewhere else, another truth or tale barely remembered. $ ytalk jennifer [1;25r [?7h [H----------------------------= YTalk version 3.3.0 =----------------------------- [2;1H [Ringing sondheim...] [Waiting for connection...] talk jeremy [24C############################### [31D# Rering jennifer # [31D############################### talk jeremy [H----------------------------= YTalk version 3.3.0 =----------------------------- [2;1H [11B [A-----------------------------= jennifer =----------------------------- [14;1Hnow you will see all of me you will see my panties says Jennifer em she remembers [Joh what fun has she this memory from before, they were electrical she says, my labia were shocked, they drew me forth towards you. ah yes so true, je Jeremy replied, this is a depth that I couldn't believe would e ever occur to me. [12B [34Cthere were rewrites and Jenn Jennifer almost disappears. Jennifer si disappears. [17CThere were rewritten and Jeremy appears and appears. Jeremy al always shows up at the right-r wrong time. [14B [20DNow this is truly a score to settle. [40CWhat say you we would settle this score with shocking behavior. [13B [33CWhat will be the most shocking behavior. [23CTe he most shocking behavior would be will be if I shit and "I let it out of my hole and I suck it back in and back and forth and the men love wat watching it" said Jenifer (this is the true part said Jenfer). [12B [44DBut it's become a true mess I'd say said someone else and I'd agree to talk to him. [25;1H [?1l >$ nothing, what's the matter here? > ^C oadooad dad