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From: Alan Sondheim <sondheim@panix.com>
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Subject: The lengthy comment on Reading the Comments which needs help:
Date: Sat, 9 Dec 2017 15:22:34 -0500 (EST)
The lengthy comment on Reading the Comments which needs help: http://www.alansondheim.org/caratunkc03.jpg http://www.alansondheim.org/caratunkc02.jpg I'm trying to write a review of: Reading the Comments: Likers, Haters, and Manipulators at the Bottom of the Web, Joseph M. Reagle, Jr., MIT Press, Cambridge and London, 2015. and what I find is that my own life is so disrupted by friends' disappearance, illness, exhaustion, police behaviour, anxiety, depression, politics, anger, etc. that it's all I can do to make my own work, stay on even keel, etc. So here's a mashup of the review, which I doubt will find acceptance (I was asked to write it, I was delighted, I keep trying, I keep faltering, I keep losing it, I realize how difficult a review can be, how hard and stylized close-reading is, how I'm already wounded, disturbed, of doubtful character, how I'm blustering about everything, how the book led me immediately to Trump which was after the publication of the book, how Trump has derailed everything. As I said to my psychologist, Trump gets into our minds, we can't deal with it, we don't have the mechanism, what gets in there circulates, creates new obstacles, there's no way around these things. So I tried dictation and everything else I could think of, nothing seems to work "What we can learn about human nature from the informative, manipulative, confusing, and amusing messages at the bottom of the web." This book is important, this country runs on anger and tweets. Reagle writes in a more innocent time, 2015, before what increasingly seems to be a proto-fascist takeover of the United States. The horror starts with the comment, comments are performative, far beyond the like/don't like and *-***** star ratings. Saying the book is "important" is part of the reason the book is important, already close to a *****, perhaps a ****, so to note, it's lives, timely, but otherwise, earlier than that, perhaps the foundations for timeliness, shared also with Nagle's Kill All Normies - I keep getting side-tracked; last night I was reading William L. Shirer's Berlin Diary, with this, from 1938: "IN A DUTCH PLANE BETWEEN AMSTERDAM AND LONDON, MARCH 12" [...] He's in Vienna: "A seat on a Dutch plane straight through to London. I had an hour for lumch. I bought the morning Berlin newspapers. Amazing! Goebbels at his best, or worst! Hitler's own newspaper, the Volkische Beobachter, on my lap here. It's screaming banner-line across page one: GERMAN-AUSTRIA SAVED FROM CHAOS. And an incredible story ot of Goebbels's evil but fertile brain describing violent Red disorders in the main streets of Vienna yesterday, fighting, shooting, pillaging. It's a complete lie. But how will the German people know it's a lie? The DNB also has a story today that sounds phony. It claims Seyss-Inquart last night telegraphed to Hitler to send troops to protect Austria from armed Socialists and Communists Since there were no 'armed Socialists and Communists' in Vienna last night, this obviously is also a lie. But interesting to note Hitler's technique. The same which was used to justify the June 30 purge. Any lie will do." (page 104.) This is my background, Shirer's account, what went through McCarthyism, body-counts in Vietnam, incendiary lies that have enormous effect, informants and productions everywhere. So 2015, a more innocent time, although some of us could already see the writing on the wall decades ago; we're all haunted by spectres. I can't help but to read Reading the Comments against this, in relation to this. From dictation: It's the barrage of material coming from the administration that creates the greatest problem this material splatters across the landscape there's no escaping it it dominates the news did not speak comes every action basically to work could be called the splatters fear splatter fear So what occurs another way to look at it I think it's with the deeper analysis dealing with splatter semiotica the book remains on the surface of things it doesn't go that direction it provides an overview and classification for that overview it hovers around Amazon it doesn't go so much into tweets for example Twitter is the problem like Ted talks they reduce everything to sound bite sound bites are then picked up by news organization and these organizations by centering on them promulgate undispersed the tweets racists evil sexist evil these things can spread in such a fashion put the book came out in 2015 way before this it seems almost like decades ago and for that reason we have to read it against that or as a foundation of that. I read all the comments on the book, from Amazon. I can't think straight. I mixed the comments, vexed the comments. I dictated again: He visits communities of Amazon reviewers fan fiction authors, online learners, cameras and so forth alienates us he finds pre Internet historical in the seatons of online comment I tend to worry myself about fake news and its relationship to reviews on Amazon and elsewhere. select nothing continue. he just He just doesn't talk about things like stacey dash went through didn't mention anything about how it's like a taxi guy walks into a meeting and carries Donuts this is a one sided narrative falling in line with collective thinking good grief nothing is the books been offered for free I through Amazon people get things in exchange for free often write great reviews could that be the case here maybe Alan sometime I tend to like the book and think that it's pressing right now um but the problem is if there is a problem has to do with fake news and the wave plate news is so dominating discussions necessarily dominating discussion of well what's going on in the trump administration and elsewhere with an attack on journalists how can a book like this survive except as a portrait of a particular. in time. Well then dispose not at all what I expected I read the comments I always do it the bottom of the web and so I thought this book would be really funny it's not funny I just enjoy reading comments that's all I didn't really enjoy the book because it didn't have enough comments maybe this comment on the book will help people enjoy the book Huh if that's not bad enough to text in the book is so tiny in life that I almost couldn't read a bit of it even where and when I wore my glasses or ask my friends to read the book for me there's lots of filler in this parking there are a lot of words words are in the book. It's amazing to me how broad a range the book covers it doesn't just stay with Amazon reviews of course but deals a little bit into politics and so forth by coming out in 2015 it misses the boat in terms of fake news so it does provide a kind of phenomenology how fake news and news before basically the Armageddon hit this storm it in other words online bulletin and bullying shells sock puppets lot of angry people in this also relates to nagles book kill all normies of course there is much much more this is awful aspects of the online culture which today almost seem to dominate in the news at least but this book covers more than that also covers normative reviews for example should one for example get something one star 2 stars 3 stars 4 stars 5 stars 5 stars I tend not to read it might be shills one star I think has to do with personal hatred to start somewhere in between I tend to read 4 stars because they seem to delve more into critical thinking about things and bagel regel does go into this in detail retail. I wish my review of Reagle's book had made it into Reagle's books that would have been an interesting post modern take on this he was I was interested in what he had to say about Amazon reviewing and some of these comments are distilled hear directly from Amazon reviewing He correctly observed that Amazon likes quick reviews it faster using it such tend to be rated more helpful overtime of people can write aphoristic Lee it might do better than people writing in great detail although for myself Alan sondheim I I generally prefer to have reviews on in detail reviews over the 20 minute word limit is absolute are absolutely necessary for books like this I'm writing this review because I like writing reviews I like writing reviews for Amazon and I like writing reviews for Goodreads sometimes I like writing reviews of Trump's tweets Trump's tweets in fact make good reviews of the news for me I find it very necessary to read Trump's tweets and not necessary to read any other news Trump's tweets are great news review. Comments build on comments, language becomes a problem, a problem within language, what the psychologist said today, that the violence of the language in the news, of violent news, then retreats/retweets within the mind, the 'Prison-House of Language' becomes the prison house of despair and inescapability. I'm the 81st reviewer of this book so far that's because there only 41 reviews when I'm reviewing the reviews of this book he looks at amazon he looks at read it he looked at the online world in general. Our Fuhrer D.T. has distorted this review to his whim, his liking. There is a brilliant review of the book: I can do no better: see https://www.theguardian.com/books/2015/jun/25/reading-the-comments-likes-haters-web-joseph-m-reagle-jr-review http://reagle.org/joseph/2015/rtc/reviews.html https://www.timeshighereducation.com/books/review-reading-the-comments-joseph-reagle-mit-press We're in a crisis state, aren't we? 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Now to continue what would it take for acceptance to block out everything else to allow this to appear someone in honor of the author and the recognition of the immense amount of work he is put into this which is an important part because and I keep using the word important when I really have nothing to say because I may not have read the entire book which I did however because it really does cover this sort of early history of the negative aspects of commentary although in fact it covers both equally from everything from gossip to Amazon comment true tro Ling 2 any sort of writing that one might do entering into places on the web or even when my dad to newsgroups anywhere in fact that one can enter a sentence that is one zone within the framework that perhaps isn't so I apologize ahead of time for this awkward review which isn't have such an hope that you might be able to help me to improve this is anything when can suggest I would take the suggestion thank you except of course for the suggestions that you're most likely tonight to make . http://www.alansondheim.org/caratunkc03.jpg +++